Sunday, April 27, 2008

Ye Zakhm

Woh zakhm bhar gaye tune khanjar se jo kiye,

Par logon ki zubaanon mein abhi aur zeher baaki hai,


Mujhe to dikhta tha woh aankhon ka samundar tera,

Kya tujhe dikhta tha mere dil mein kitna seher baaki hai???

(seher - sehra = desert)


Tu bahaar hai kal gul khilaa ke chali jaayegi,

Kya mud ke dekhegi kitnaa sunsaan sheher baki hai??


Kehne ko to do saahil kabhi mil hi nahin sakte,

Dekhna ye hai unhein dubone ko kya koi leher baki hai??


Tune sun kar bhi ansuni kar di woh ankahi baat,

E-husn, tune maut to de di,

Ab dhaane ko kya aur keher baki hai??



17 comments:

Vikram Rathi said...

heyy....gud boss....keep it up..
kabhi mann kiya to kisi ko cut-copy-paste kar doonga.... ;)

dhwani said...

kuch alag si tehzeeb hai ki log afsanon mein aksar,
dil mein chhupe kuch sawaal pooch liya karte hain...

Bushra said...

Seems to be written after a lot of contemplation,quite powerfully articulated.Well done!!

Gauravgatha said...

@Rathi,
Copy kar lena yaar cut mat karna.. :P

@dhwani,
Thats the best comment I cud get. Thnx a lot.

@Bushra.
U r right (as usual :))
It has been written with some contemplation.

namrata said...

Khoob farmaya .....aise hi likhte raho n hum jaise nadan bachon k liye EX pakka kerte rho..[:P]...
..carryon with your innovation...all the best..[:)]

sujata said...

Toooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud...............!

sanchita said...

Mash Allah!! Kya likha hai apne. Keep it up. Let your overflowing feelings get tangled in your powerful words.

shweta said...

grttttt

original and straight from heart....

simple bt effective......
keep it up;)

garima said...

xcellent.........

aaj pata chala tere dilon dimag mein kya chalta rehta hai.

jst kidng
bt i'm really impressed.
22222222222222222222gud

Pradeep ۩۞۩ with Little Kingdom ۩۞۩ said...

hey Gaurav...good show man....nice lines with deep depth....

Tere charchon me gooroor sa dikhta tha sabhi ko....

Abhi kaamyaabi ke kai aur mukaam bankin hain....

All the best..!!!

Karuna said...

A lot said in simple words.. awesome.

Tanu said...

Today when i decided to define a comment for ur this creation... words somehow continue to elude from my side ...
believe me!!
it is undefinable ......
There are no words which can define the beauty of your thoughts..
Words here .... are full of edenic perkin.
Thoughts are the bowl of devine wine..
It is sure that ur passion is not less than the passion of ocean.
Your emotions are the beautiful rhythem of music,, with sweet expression contained in it.
Trust Me ,,
No word can ever capture the essence of it.

YOU ARE INCREDIBLY AMAZING

Proud to be
Your Friend
Tanu ..

Yogi said...

dil cheer kar rakh dene wale is aashiq, ki mahbooba ke liye bas do lines-

"khuda ne jis shishe se tarasha hai tujhe,
us shishe se katl hona bhi manjoor hai ise"

priti said...

Tareef Aapki Karein Kaise Alfaz Nahi Milte
Aap Jaise Kisi Aur Mein Andaaz Nahi Milte,
Khuda Jaane Kya Kasar Hai Hamari Chahat Mein,
Hum Milte Hain Aapse, Humein Aap Nahi Milte

words fall sick 2 comment ...

swaty gupta said...

Gaurav I really feel too small to comment here
Its AWE-inspiring
Wish you all the best, God Bless

namrata said...

awesome :)
all d best!!

Aalisha said...

aksar log shari me dil ki baat keh dete hai.....gud job...