Woh zakhm bhar gaye tune khanjar se jo kiye,
Par logon ki zubaanon mein abhi aur zeher baaki hai,
Mujhe to dikhta tha woh aankhon ka samundar tera,
Kya tujhe dikhta tha mere dil mein kitna seher baaki hai???
(seher - sehra = desert)
Tu bahaar hai kal gul khilaa ke chali jaayegi,
Kya mud ke dekhegi kitnaa sunsaan sheher baki hai??
Kehne ko to do saahil kabhi mil hi nahin sakte,
Dekhna ye hai unhein dubone ko kya koi leher baki hai??
Tune sun kar bhi ansuni kar di woh ankahi baat,
E-husn, tune maut to de di,
Ab dhaane ko kya aur keher baki hai??
11 comments:
heyy....gud boss....keep it up..
kabhi mann kiya to kisi ko cut-copy-paste kar doonga.... ;)
kuch alag si tehzeeb hai ki log afsanon mein aksar,
dil mein chhupe kuch sawaal pooch liya karte hain...
Seems to be written after a lot of contemplation,quite powerfully articulated.Well done!!
@Rathi,
Copy kar lena yaar cut mat karna.. :P
@dhwani,
Thats the best comment I cud get. Thnx a lot.
@Bushra.
U r right (as usual :))
It has been written with some contemplation.
Khoob farmaya .....aise hi likhte raho n hum jaise nadan bachon k liye EX pakka kerte rho..[:P]...
..carryon with your innovation...all the best..[:)]
grttttt
original and straight from heart....
simple bt effective......
keep it up;)
hey Gaurav...good show man....nice lines with deep depth....
Tere charchon me gooroor sa dikhta tha sabhi ko....
Abhi kaamyaabi ke kai aur mukaam bankin hain....
All the best..!!!
Today when i decided to define a comment for ur this creation... words somehow continue to elude from my side ...
believe me!!
it is undefinable ......
There are no words which can define the beauty of your thoughts..
Words here .... are full of edenic perkin.
Thoughts are the bowl of devine wine..
It is sure that ur passion is not less than the passion of ocean.
Your emotions are the beautiful rhythem of music,, with sweet expression contained in it.
Trust Me ,,
No word can ever capture the essence of it.
YOU ARE INCREDIBLY AMAZING
Proud to be
Your Friend
Tanu ..
dil cheer kar rakh dene wale is aashiq, ki mahbooba ke liye bas do lines-
"khuda ne jis shishe se tarasha hai tujhe,
us shishe se katl hona bhi manjoor hai ise"
Gaurav I really feel too small to comment here
Its AWE-inspiring
Wish you all the best, God Bless
awesome :)
all d best!!
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