tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post6723207331460616180..comments2023-04-15T08:42:03.279-07:00Comments on Afsana-e-Tehzeeb: Bhookh aur ye DiwaliKharageoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15188988534621514659noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-27335665161764257222012-04-19T06:30:05.780-07:002012-04-19T06:30:05.780-07:00awesome dude
touchingawesome dude<br />touchingAlihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03484983507691233556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-41706707767204316322011-12-21T00:20:34.975-08:002011-12-21T00:20:34.975-08:00भूख नहीं है हमें जरा भी, ले जाओ अपने थाली.
तड़प रहे...भूख नहीं है हमें जरा भी, ले जाओ अपने थाली.<br />तड़प रहे हैं लाखो बच्चे भूखे, तुमे प्यारी मदिरा प्याली.अमित वर्माhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16531680315669801282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-84164876710611772852011-12-21T00:18:10.920-08:002011-12-21T00:18:10.920-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.अमित वर्माhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16531680315669801282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-77598404510494105282011-11-25T04:44:12.401-08:002011-11-25T04:44:12.401-08:00nice.........nice.........bhumika deep bhandarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141221924399885379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-9300158730052328822011-09-10T11:21:04.834-07:002011-09-10T11:21:04.834-07:00real goodreal goodDeepakhttp://www.prativad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-36297435590745335232011-08-30T07:36:32.611-07:002011-08-30T07:36:32.611-07:00thanks everyone.. :)thanks everyone.. :)Kharageoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188988534621514659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-48941567220831724982011-08-20T03:02:21.344-07:002011-08-20T03:02:21.344-07:00बहुत अच्छा प्रयासबहुत अच्छा प्रयासRadhika Vermahttp://www.prativad.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-64603872100370176752011-06-18T10:50:47.772-07:002011-06-18T10:50:47.772-07:00amazing idea and touching writing style. Blasting....amazing idea and touching writing style. Blasting.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11086893114631440281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-69294358107008036732010-11-22T00:10:15.151-08:002010-11-22T00:10:15.151-08:00bahut sunder abhivyakti..........
देख पड़ा है तेल...bahut sunder abhivyakti..........<br /><br />देख पड़ा है तेल ये तेरा , रंगोली के रंगों पर ,<br />और हंस रहा चूल्हा उसका , पेट में होते दंगों पर ,<br />सुबह सुबह हैं कुत्ते चखते , देख तेरे पकवानों को ,<br />कौन देखता कचरा खाते , कुत्तों से इंसानों को ,..<br /><br />visheshkar ye panktiyan...नीलांशhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06348811803233978822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-13776387298646292262010-11-04T20:00:08.387-07:002010-11-04T20:00:08.387-07:00second last stanza is really touching.Brings out t...second last stanza is really touching.Brings out the crux of our parsimonious society.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15442944029090267525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-1752787305040050252010-11-04T16:27:53.370-07:002010-11-04T16:27:53.370-07:00Brilliant.
Kya irony.
Compells one to think.Brilliant.<br />Kya irony.<br />Compells one to think.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04868560605198128024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141883131818915851.post-50563047662343346592010-11-04T15:31:34.965-07:002010-11-04T15:31:34.965-07:00intelligent and incisive..delivers every idea it w...intelligent and incisive..delivers every idea it was meant to....great work!!!Deepakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17776103552013258245noreply@blogger.com